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familiar paths and hallways,
flow by me.
forget me.

i can't sleep anymore,
you'll never feel the cold,
because i'm not for you.
forget me.

seasons grow brittle,
i'd like to escape.
forget me.

i'm freezing in this endless summer,
i'd build a world for you,
but i'm no longer that kind of joy.
forget me.
©2007-2010 ~neo-tek
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i haven't written it yet ... free flow off the top of my head as usual.

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I love it. I relate so much, sadly.
i'd build a world for you,
but i'm no longer that kind of joy.
forget me.

Those are my favorite lines...like, I worked so hard to do everything right for you, but you don't really care, so whatever. D=

I like your writing. <3

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thank you :) you caught the meaning perfectly ;)
and thanks for the :+fav: :hug:

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I likes... No one could ever forget you.
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You may not be for that person any longer.

But it is always easier to let go.. than forget.

Forgetting is erasing everything that ever had to do with them.

Good stuff. :)

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